First and most important - cut, edited, and presented way way better than most amateur wakeboard (or other) videos I've seen so any criticism you see here and likely from others should be interpreted as good because it looks like you have enough understanding and can improve.
My main critique is your colors. I think you adjusted them too cool - likely were focused on the blue of the sky and water, but sacrificed skin tone too much.
As for composition, your wakeboarding tricks aren't pro level, so id suggest compensating by adding in more variety of angles on the shooting - like from a chase jet ski or a photog riding a tube. I'd also add some "fun" shots, meaning brief 1-2 second cuts with you guys not Wakeboarding - smiling, pushing each other in the water, etc. I say this thinking that since your tricks themselves aren't eough to blow people away, you want to add variety and concentrate on the "we had a blast" emotion, not "we rock as wakeboarders".
Keep them coming - look forward to waht you can do on your next one!
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