you had a couple pretty tight shots. i especially liked when the cameral followed you thru the trees toward the end of it. but you did have just alot of idle riding/ shots in there where nothing was happening. its kinda hard to really grab a viewers attention when theyre just watching you ride straight from the dock. try getting some boat shots, or even a chase boat if possible. other than that it was pretty good. keep it up, and you could definatly nail 180's and even 3's if you tried
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