Didnt watch the whole thing (stopped at 5:40), but if you dont mind a few suggestions...
Work on your toeside for sure. I'm sure this isnt a completely accurate depiction of your riding, but its certainly more enjoyable to watch a rider who can hit both wakes, and toeside tricks can be really fun. I put in some time to work on my toeside jumps and now I almost prefer toeside tricks.
As far as editing goes, change it up. The constant tantrums get a little boring to watch (not that I can even do them, so props there), even throwing a few shots of grabs or carving in between helps. And try to chop it down. 13 min is a loooong video, and I doubt many people will get to the end of the video. You dont need to use all the footage you have, just pick the highlights.
Other than that the video looked good, great riding, beautiful conditions, couldnt ask for much more out of a summer day.