Sequence

Any Suggestions...

and another. I am having a lot of fun learning new tricks with every sequence i do, but the only feedback i am getting is from friends who are not photogs, so they all say they look good. i want some honest feedback.

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For me... too busy. Maybe try it taking one or two shots of the rider out of the sequence. I get bothered when one shot covers another.

Nice PS work though.

I don't think the shot's are " too busy " but I do think that if you could work on the angles it would help.

The last pic is the best IMHO because you can see the progression of what the rider is doing.

That being said, it's also the most "boring" because it isn't some crazy trick or whatever..

Also, you cut the line off above the last pic of the rider in the last shot...

I would love to see a shot taken perpindicular to the rider at the apex of his jump off of the kicker in shots 1 and 2.

I try to take the approach that someone who has no idea about wakeboarding can look at the picture and see what is going on...

I find myself having to look at each frame in the sequence to figure this out....

Not to be too discouraging, I think this is a great start that will get only better! The stitching and everything else looks good!

Thanks for the input guys! That ramp is hard to shoot sequences from the side because you lose the riders face most of the time.

And Rob Mapp who i shoot most of the time goes so big he goes out of frame a lot from the side.

Here's one from the side.

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