Looks good! You've definitely got the basic ideas right... couple suggestions:
1) Commit to a little bit more aggresive edge (you want to set a good edge early and hold it all the way through the wake)
2) Get a bit lower in order to get a better 'pop' off the lip ( it looked like you were standing tall and absorbing alotta the 'kick' you need to get good air) let the wake push you up, and your momentum from the cut carry you sideways
** NOTE ** There are few things sweeter in this world than sticking your first smooth w2w jump. Keep at it, and good luck.