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Old    Luker (xbones)      Join Date: Mar 2007       06-02-2009, 5:45 PM Reply   
Pops let me steal his cheap little Sony since I'm all gimpy (ACL), so that I could start doing some filming. I made it out to the lake yesterday with two of my buddies and after 30 minutes of footy on a DVD-RW and 2 or 3 hours of editing in movie maker while I should have been working ;) ... I produced my first edit. I'd really like to get decent at this so constructive criticism is welcomed. Enjoy:

http://vimeo.com/4970622
Old    David Christman (lfrider92)      Join Date: Sep 2008       06-02-2009, 5:53 PM Reply   
right on, looks pretty sick.
Old    Cameron Brown (killercam)      Join Date: May 2009       06-02-2009, 6:55 PM Reply   
Looks good man. The beginning looks really legit, get some chaseboat shots and you'll have a cool little video on a budget!
Old    Jeremy Byrom (wakerider111)      Join Date: Jul 2006       06-02-2009, 7:18 PM Reply   
much better than my first edit(s)
good job
Old    Billy Boozer (bboozer)      Join Date: Apr 2007       06-03-2009, 10:55 AM Reply   
I can't view it because it says all your videos are private
Old    Billy Boozer (bboozer)      Join Date: Apr 2007       06-03-2009, 10:57 AM Reply   
and as soon as I posted... then it started playing!!!
Old    Mallenger (mallenger)      Join Date: Jun 2006       06-03-2009, 12:37 PM Reply   
Nice edit. You asked for constructive criticism... for me it had too much slow-mo. Film more and get more tricks in there. You started the 1st rider out straight to back-roll, might be cool to see his trick progression... my $0.02
Old    Loren (helix_rider)      Join Date: Mar 2003       06-03-2009, 12:39 PM Reply   
Sweet vid. The only thing I have to critique is your positioning in the boat. Find a place to film from that reduces the amount of water that can be seen coming off the boat...otherwise keep it up!
Old    Austin B (splatman)      Join Date: Jul 2008       06-03-2009, 4:21 PM Reply   
I dig.
Old    Luke Johnson (luke_j)      Join Date: Jul 2008       06-03-2009, 4:39 PM Reply   
two and a half minutes in there had only been like 5 tricks... speed it up! but looked good other than that, just pick up the pace on the clips
Old    Robot (k9fxr)      Join Date: Jul 2005       06-03-2009, 5:42 PM Reply   
Nice job, esp for a first run at it.
I liked the slo mo, I actually saw some things because of it that will help me
Old    Luker (xbones)      Join Date: Mar 2007       06-03-2009, 6:03 PM Reply   
Thanks for the feedback guys. I'll post up my next crack at it ;)
Old    Alan Slabaugh (alans)      Join Date: Aug 2005       06-03-2009, 6:17 PM Reply   
I really liked it, reminds my of my old crew.
Old    Johnny (johnny_defacto)      Join Date: Sep 2006       06-03-2009, 6:21 PM Reply   
Luker. Nice video. I really like the fast motion- drive to the launch. I always enjoy seeing what other lakes are like. Also you put in "good" tricks only and did not waste time/tricks.

I agree with the other suggestions to get a few more tricks in, it dragged a little bit.

Finally, i noticed that some shots were off the tripod. If you're going to use the tripod, you need to "level" it once the boat is on plane at riding speed, that way you will get a level shot as you pan side to side. I noticed a few shots that the angle would change/tilt as you panned from side to side.

Otherwise, nice work, and you used a song from my favorite band.
Old    Jeff Mathis (bbsxkills)      Join Date: Dec 2008       06-04-2009, 6:15 PM Reply   
Manchester owns! No tri-pod my friend... just bad horizon work by yours truly, I will work on it ;)
Old    Kyle Duffy (duffmangt)      Join Date: Jan 2008       06-04-2009, 7:10 PM Reply   
manchester is the most played band on our boat...loved them! excellent song choice

my criticism is positioning on the boat as well, a little to much water spray in some of the shots...great vid though, when it finished i watched it again
Old    Luker (xbones)      Join Date: Mar 2007       06-05-2009, 10:43 AM Reply   
The post from Jeff above is actually me ;) On his laptop.

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